让自己的句子“变”起来

　　多数考生的作文有一个共同的特点：句子平淡无奇，没有任何新意可言，文章千篇一律。那么，如何改变这种状况呢？

第一，试着改变一下每个句子的开头。
1以形容词或形容词组开头
如：①Mary was very pleased and telephoned her mother．
→Pleased，Mary telephoned her mother．
②The girl，hungry and thirsty，went back home．
→Hungry and thirsty，the girl went back home．

2．以副词开头
如：The child stayed there quietly．
→Quietly，the child stayed there．
3．以不定式开头
如：He got up very early to catch the bus．→To catch the bus，he got up very early．
4．以现在分词或过去分词开头
如：①I was filled with anticipation when I came home from school that dark winter's day so long ago．
→Coming home from school that dark winter's day so long ago，I was filled with anticipation．
②If you give me enough time，I can do it well．
→Given enough time，I can do it well．
5．以介词短语开头
如：Chester like many other adventurershad experienced fear and conquered it．
→Like many other adventurers，Chester had experienced fear and conquered it．
6．以同位语开头
如：Sue，our monitor，always likes giving suggestions to everybody．
→Our monitor，Sue，always likes giving suggestions to everybody．
7．以从句开头
如：①Francis had already surprised his friends several times before he sailed round the world single-handed．
→Before he sailed round the world single-handed，Francis had already surprised his friends several times．
②You will greatly improve your finished product if you have a quality control inspection．
→If you have a quality control inspection， you will greatly improve your finished product．
第二，改变一下句子的类型，把简单句、并列句和复合句混合在一起使用。如下面的一小段例文：

I have often wondered whether some people，who had no intention of making a purchase，would take advantage of this privilege． One day I asked this question to the shop girl， and I learned it was indeed the case．

第三，改变句子的长度。

短句子适用于表述概念，陈述事实，增强论述的力度；长句子经常用于描写，解释和论述一个完整的情况。如：
Economy is the art of making the most of life．
Love is as necessary to the human being as food and shelter．There were still situations in whichI couldn't be certain my decision had been theright one，but I had learned to accept this as a constant problem for a surgeon，one that could never be completely resolved—and I could live with it．
尽量使自己的文章的长短句结合，不要一味地使用短句或一味地使用长句，否则会使人感到句子过于简单或过于晦涩。
综合上述三点，试着把自己的句子作一些调整，其实只是简简单单的变化，可收到的效果会是大不一样的。

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