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摘 要：
2. 写出正确的句子，简单句与复合句交替使用。
3. 学习使用谚语，为作文增色。
例如：Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成。
现以2001年6月的作文为例：那一年作文要求三个部分的内容：
①表示对朋友到来的欢迎；②假期安排；③注意事项。
I’m very glad that you will come to see me during the weeklong holiday.We have not seen each other for two years, so this time we can spend the holiday together. How nice will see you!
Since you left Beijing 2 years ago, Beijing has made great changes because of 2008 Olympic. You will be surprised by those changes. I help you to make some arrangements during the holiday. We can go shopping in WangFuJin Department Store, climbing the Mountain Xiang, visiting the Summer Palace and Forbidden Cities in Beijing. Beijing has many good places we can visit. I think we will have a very good time together.
By the way, you should telephone me when you come to Beijing, I will meet you in
the railway station. I’m looking forward to your coming.
从切题方面来看，第一段都与内容相吻合，表示欢迎朋友的到来，第二段中前两句都没有切题，但句子也都还正确，第三段中基本切题，句子也基本正确，虽然没有写许多复合句或
谚语等为作文增色，但这样的作文就可以得到9分，如果再能写几个正确又带色彩的句子，就可得到12分以上。
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